Autumn's chill
my entry for the "Falling Leaves" haiku challenge #5
By Imola TóthPublished 7 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Dmitry Ganin on Unsplash
a cool eve descends
a symphony of colors
waltz, as dusk settles in.
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I can feel the chill. Beautiful work, Imola!
Ah, a symphony of colours, that was beautiful. Loved your Haiku!
I could feel the cool eve. I could see the symphony of colours. But it makes me sad when they waltz as the dusk settles in. Love how you captured all that the challenge was asking for in this one. Best of luck in the challenge 🤗❤️
I am waltzing down that path in the image. Loved this one.
Oh wonderful amount of movement and grace in this. Synthony and waltz are perfectly placed!
This breathes autumn, Imola.