i’ve been tRiPpIn’
aGaIn and aGaIn
not even suRe
when it sTaRtEd
or why it keeps hApPeNiNg.
14 DaYs…
i tElL mYsElF JuSt 14
like a number i hOlD oNtO
like my LiFe depEnds on it.
tHe hEaRt moves on its oWn, sTubBorn ,
it doesn’t lIsTeN
it never rEaLlY dOeS...
iT’s oBvIoUs nOw, at least, it sHoUlD bE, isn't it?
there’s enOugH
to understand…
i juSt don’T say it oUt lOuD.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
Comments (22)
This is smart.
I always love your poetry, sweet Lady. The way you present it makes it also a form of art. You know I love your formatting!!! Congratulations on your greatly deserved Top Story! ⚡️💙 Bill⚡️
That was fun to read Komal.
CONGRATS TOP STORY 🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀
Congrats on the TS, Komal. The mental chaos really comes through with the disruptive letters. Lends an oomph to the rhythm!
Great use of disruptive lettering. It forces attention on the words in a great way. Jarring and fantastic read. Congratulations on Top Story.
Congratulations, well deserve. I know the feeling to well! Hugs, Komal!
I loved the rhythm of this one 🎶
A new love? Interesting music and the poem has its rhythm so that is what I surmise…
🫶🏾
Tactile even in the reading of it. Gets in between those grooves in the brain... Real poetic architecture, Komal. Congratulations on the top story!
Great Piece of work 👍🏾 I love that song 🎵 and Congrats on your Top Story ❤️
I really enjoyed this one Komal Though I can’t say I quite understand the format 🤔 you’ve certainly given me a lot to think about :)
I love this, too, in its entirety, and the lyrical pairing is fire!🔥 Congratulations on your top story, Komal. Following you now!
Love this
Great job, I love your formatting, it's punchy and has a nice rhythm.
Somehow, I think we all have these days.
This is funky and fun! 🤩 Very eye catching.
This is neat, my head gave it its own voice, well done
Oh, wouldn't it be great if our hearts wouldn't keep dragging us back to where we still long to be..we speak it to our mind and our heart is over there in LaLa land. 💧 ❤️☀️✨
This hits real hard right now…great work.
This is phenomenal! I love the format of this poem.😊